This wasn't really a ballad that you chose, but the photos and videos you chose mostly related to the subject and I think the music fit the video. I think next time, if you do this again, you could check some of the grammar and punctuation, and change some of the pictures so that they fit the sentence a bit more, but I understand that this can be hard to do sometimes. Also, the poem and the pictures didn't have much depth to them; they were more just a random collection of unrelated things that would help. As a consequence, the pictures don't really flow together, they look like random pictures/videos strung together, which to be honest I think is really hard to avoid. I think that if you were to avoid that, you'd have to change the poem so that one paragraph has one topic and each line elaborates, rather than addressing a whole new problem, which would mean that the pictures look like they have more in common. I think you have made a really good choice with the music though; it really fits, and if you could get the pictures to fit the way the music does, this would be really good.
This was a good poem, but there were some flaws in the video. A few of the slides were too long, so there were one or two seconds after some slides that were spare. There was one slide that I finished reading as soon as the star appeared in the middle: May shark attacks be decreased. A few of the pictures didn't really make sense with the words to me, for example, the slide with the words: May terrorist attacks be unknown May gangs do good instead of bad.
This wasn't really a ballad that you chose, but the photos and videos you chose mostly related to the subject and I think the music fit the video. I think next time, if you do this again, you could check some of the grammar and punctuation, and change some of the pictures so that they fit the sentence a bit more, but I understand that this can be hard to do sometimes. Also, the poem and the pictures didn't have much depth to them; they were more just a random collection of unrelated things that would help. As a consequence, the pictures don't really flow together, they look like random pictures/videos strung together, which to be honest I think is really hard to avoid. I think that if you were to avoid that, you'd have to change the poem so that one paragraph has one topic and each line elaborates, rather than addressing a whole new problem, which would mean that the pictures look like they have more in common. I think you have made a really good choice with the music though; it really fits, and if you could get the pictures to fit the way the music does, this would be really good.
ReplyDeleteThis was a good poem, but there were some flaws in the video. A few of the slides were too long, so there were one or two seconds after some slides that were spare. There was one slide that I finished reading as soon as the star appeared in the middle: May shark attacks be decreased. A few of the pictures didn't really make sense with the words to me, for example, the slide with the words: May terrorist attacks be unknown May gangs do good instead of bad.
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